Song Feedback Guidelines

— Affirm one another —

Song Categories

  • Impact
    1. Personal – unique and of interest to a individual or very small circle
    2. Local – works locally, some general interest, but needs a personal presentation to make it work
    3. National – universal appeal and travels without the need for personal presentation
  • Intention
    1. Commercial / radio – goal is broad, commercial interest, to get cut and radio airplay
    2. Congregational – designed for group worship expression
    3. Creative expression – pretty much anything else

Journey

  • Audience – who is your audience
  • Communication – do you have their attention
  • Musically interesting / originality / intro thru close
  • Take me on a journey – blend of music and story
  • Don’t lose me – rabbit trails / disjointed musically / poor presentation

Lyric

  • Theme / Purpose – Is it clearly defined and supported throughout the song?
  • Logic flow – can people follow it without getting lost or rabbit trailed?
  • Cliché’s – To easy…is there a better way to say this?
  • Poetry – “too clever by half” Balance
  • Rhyming – good, poor?
  • Real speak / yoda speak – would you talk to someone like this?
  • Pictures vs statements – much stronger if they can vision it
  • Prosody – do lyrics serve the music?

Musicality

  • Intro – don’t lose them before you start the song
  • Interesting – is it captivating to the ear?
  • If worship – can a congregation sing it?
  • Prosody – does the music serve the lyric?
  • Flow – Disjointed music sections? Good blend from section to section? To much space / not enough space?
  • Hook – that musical motif that everyone wants to hear again and again

Presentation

  • Performance – does it matter for this song? If yes, how?
  • Production (if recorded) / arrangement
  • Energy – is it right for the song? Dynamics?
  • Form – ABA, AAA, etc
  • Setup / Follow-up – do you need to setup the song? Do you need to explain?

— Affirm one another —